Hello'
I have to admit when I came across your crossover story of Mass Effect and Invader Zim I was very skeptical about this story. How could someone take two completely different universes, merge them into one, and making it convincing enough to satisfy both audiences? Just by reading the summary I felt something in the back of my mind telling me to push the back button and forget what you saw.
I clicked on your story anyway and was surprised, relieved, and very happy about how you portrayed the characters amazingly well. Once I started reading your story I just couldn't put it down! I could actually visualize everything happening in the story being presented as an animated special. I especially loved how you portrayed how the characters interacted with each other and how they developed throughout the story.
Whenever I read a fanfic I always seem to dread over whether or not the author could stay true to the characters they're writing about. I read through your story almost looking for any flaw to convince me to go back and read something else. Aside from a few grammatical errors I am glad that I took the time to read through your story before judging it. Your story shows a lot of promise and in my opinion deserves a lot more reviews than you currently have right now.
I'm very glad that you plan on writing more chapters and I can hardly wait for the next update. Please update soon, the suspense is killing me!
"I like to expect the worst. There's a small chance I may be pleasantly surprised."
-Garrus V.